1. What is my thesis?
The world should suspend all the international events if epidemic breaks out.
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I am using real cases, experts' opinions.
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
I think my arguments are based on both evidence and emotion. It is because I will use real case of breakout of epidemics and opinions of citizens. Also, I have some articles to support my thesis statistically or logically.
My Confirmation
My Confirmation
International events and breakout or spread of international epidemics is not related. However, in two points of view -one is about prevention system and another is about opinions and responses of citizens, proceeding international events or game quite affect our society negatively by epidemics.
Ofcourse, WHO, governments and Airport quarantine station always keep an eye on breakout and spread of international epidemics. They quarantine almost every goods from all over the world and have very difficult, picky process or law. If you look into this article, you will realize how difficult to bring overseas goods to the country.
http://blog.naver.com/sagemara/11046041
Also, WHO(World Health Organization) has divided the situation when the epidemic breaks out. Looked like this, many people and organization are working hard to prevent or stop the international epidemics. However, although they do their best to prevent it, dangerous infectious diseases always break out and cause negative results. It is because of increasing of international exchange as i mentioned in introduction. Especially, international events, which many people-maybe people all around the world attend.Occasionally, Its scale is quite extensive so many foreigners make a transfer and they are likely to be 'moving' source of infection.
Actually, in 2009, during influenza season, there was Global Fair & Festival in Incheon, Korea. As many people supposed and worried, it caused many infected people and brought chaos and concern to many people. Although people quarantine and examine foreigners and overseas goods, since quarantine and prevention are people's work, if international events and games are held, there might be serious and rapid spread of international epidemics.
Also, in the situation which doesn't have any exact prevention of epidemics and news or report about it, just proceeding international events will only bring confusion to the people and our whole society. In effect, Korean government and the host's confused , late decision and response made Korean citizens felt great fear when the Model UN was held in DukSeong Women's University in Seoul during Ebola season. Even Korean citizens moved against that international events and kept insisting suspend of the event. Korean citizens did that kind of fierce behavior because there weren't enough news , reports, or certain prevention of Ebola. Therefore, their movement achieved prohibition of three Nigerian students' entry and this happening drew world's attention and brought the country's dignity down the the ground. If this events were delayed, Korean citizens would have not done these things.
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