First Draft Introduction

Serious, and infectious epidemics seem to exist only in the movies or the countries far from us. However, due to the increasing international exchange such as overseas trips and trades, it started to give direct effects to all over the world and many citizens are more worried about breakout of epidemics than before. In reality, because of infectious international disease - Ebola, many Korean strongly insisted that international events which was supposed to held in DukSeong Women's University should be suspended or stopped. Although Korean government and DukSeong explained the Ebola situation, it was beyond their ability to calm down Korean citizens since there wasn't any exact news or prevention. Although it seems to be not dangerous, the world should suspend all the international events and games if epidemic break out. 

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by explaining real case of breakout of international disease and responses of Korean citizens. And I pointed out why citizens responded like that.

2. Explains the topic-
In the attention grabber, I introduce all the elements of my topic : reasons why epidemic spreads more effectively nowadays, responses of citizens about breakout of epidemics, and the their connections with my thesis.

3. My thesis -
It is reasonable, and clear. I believe that to support my thesis "The world should suspend all the international events and games if epidemic break out", explaining current situation related to international disease Ebola was effective.